Oh, this was really interesting!! I think the way you eased canon dialogue and elements into this was really well done, and how the story builds up and fills spaces we have yet to know about. Your POV choice was great, as an outsider it seems the perfect choice to see these interactions in a more objective way )i mean, the other are sort of biting their heads off, too busy doing that to pay attention to anything else, he?) He is also adorable and the fact that he befriended Tobio of all places talks and so easily says a lot about how scary everybody must be! I absolutely adored the subtlety of miyakage (I SHIP IT SO HARD ITS NOT FUNNY AT ALL), seeing as it is Chigaya's pov, and the small details you added to their interactions just !!!!!!!!. Thank you for writing this, makes me wanna know more <3!! Loved it!
thank you so much for reading this! i'm glad you liked it! i'm also glad that you liked the subtlety of the ship - i didn't want to jump into anything too soon - and i had the scene where miya texts kageyama at the ending in mind when i was writing this whole thing, hoping that the start of a text conversation could be a springboard into a deeper friendship (sadly over distance) which can be expanded upon once we have more canon details! like, for example, which prefecture/school miya's from! when i wrote this i just picked osaka at random (hence the area code in his phone number), and i wonder what it would be like... long distance friendship --> lovers aHA END ME. at least i can hope to see miya again at nationals :')
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