Comment on walk away, walk away

1. scrapperdroid Wed 24 Jan 2024 08:45AM UTC

   

   It's amazing how communication can solve so many problems... but even better when it's as well portrayed as it is here. Pulling off two locations/protagonists at once is a juggling act but damn, you've caught everything. Especially with the nice little reminders of what happened the last time that character was the focus (i.e. Mickey ends "his" paragraph with going to take a shower, next paragraph focused on him begins with pointing out his wet hair). Love it!

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2. 1. sam_writes_fics Thu 25 Jan 2024 01:34PM UTC

      

      thank you so so much :') you're so kind <3

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