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What Should Have Been (In this Life)

Summary:

What if the rocks never crushed him?
What if the death never claimed her?
What if Team Minato had remained whole?

What Should Have Been (In This Life) is a reimagining of the Naruto timeline, where Obito survives the mission that should have ended his story.
Instead of death, he carries scars, doubts, and a restless heart one that drives him to chase strength under the eye of Jiraiya, leaving Konoha for years.
Rin, left behind, finds her own path as a healer, realizing too late that the boy she thought she only admired was the one she truly loved.
Kakashi, once a rival, slowly becomes a brother as he grows beside them.

Five years later, Obito returns not a ghost, not a villain, but a man forged by fire and distance. Together, they must face the world as it is… and as it should have been.

Chapter 1: The Mission That Should Have Broken Them

Chapter Text

The Third Hokage’s office smelled faintly of smoke and old paper. Stacks of mission scrolls lined the shelves, some tied neatly in bundles, others spilling loose across his desk.

Sunlight streamed through the tall windows, slanting across the wood and parchment, glinting off the headband resting on his brow.

The air itself seemed heavy half with the dust of history, half with the weight of the war that pressed on every decision made within these walls.

Hiruzen Sarutobi sat with his hands folded over a map inked in black and red, the faint curl of his pipe drifting into the rafters above.

His eyes, dark and shrewd, swept over the three young shinobi standing before him—children by age, soldiers by necessity.

There was warmth in that gaze, but also something heavier: the knowledge that war had already stolen too much from Konoha’s youth, and it would not stop here.

Obito shifted on his feet, uncomfortable under the Hokage’s stare.

His palms were damp, fists clenched tight at his sides as if he could hold himself together through sheer willpower.

He tried to stand tall like Kakashi, tried to look confident like Rin, but his chest was a tight knot.

Rin’s posture was steady beside him, her dark hair brushing her shoulders, her chin held just high enough to show respect without fear. She was composed, her brown eyes calm but sharp always the heart of the team, but not fragile. Never fragile.

And Kakashi… Kakashi was unreadable as ever.

His arms were crossed over his chest, one thumb hooked lazily under the strap of his weapon pouch.

His head tilted just slightly, mask concealing his mouth, but his single visible eye betrayed nothing neither nerves nor excitement, just a cool acceptance of what was to come.

“This mission will not be easy,” Hiruzen said, his voice carrying that gravelly authority that silenced even the air around them.

He tapped the end of his pipe against the map, where the Kannabi Bridge was drawn in dark ink.

“The Kannabi Bridge must be destroyed. It is a critical supply line for Iwagakure’s forces. Their victories on the frontlines are fed by this bridge, and if it falls, it could turn the tide of this war.”

He paused, letting the weight of his words settle.

His gaze lingered on each of them in turn, measuring not just their skill but their hearts.

“I trust Team Minato to succeed. But I will not lie to you the risks are great. The enemy knows the value of this bridge. They will defend it with everything they have.”

Obito swallowed hard, throat dry. His heart drummed in his ears.

Great risks. Great heroes.

He wanted so badly to be both.

To walk out of this mission with his name whispered in the same breath as legends.

To be someone Rin could look at the way she looked at Kakashi.

“Understood, Hokage,” Kakashi said crisply, his tone clipped, efficient like the mission was already halfway done.

He didn’t fidget, didn’t blink, just absorbed the words and stood ready, as if danger had never once unsettled him.

Rin dipped her head in a respectful bow. “We won’t fail, Hokage,” she said softly, but her voice carried quiet conviction. Her calmness was steadying, like cool water poured over fire.

Obito hesitated. Half a beat too long. His shoulders stiffened, and he forced himself into a bow, words catching in his throat before tumbling out in a rush.

“Y-Yes, Hokage. I—I understand.”

He prayed no one noticed the stumble.

But the difference was there all the same Kakashi’s effortless confidence, Rin’s composed assurance, and his own faltering voice cracking through the silence.

The silence lingered a moment after Obito’s stumble, heavy and uncomfortable in his chest.

Hiruzen’s eyes softened, though his expression remained grave. He leaned back slightly, pipe resting between his fingers as a curl of smoke drifted upward.

“Kakashi,” he said first, voice steady. The boy straightened, one eye focused sharply on the Hokage.

“Your talent and precision are unmatched for someone so young. But do not mistake skill for wisdom. Remember commanders do not only carry jutsu. They carry lives. Those who follow you must be more than blades in your hand. They are hearts you must protect.”

Kakashi gave the faintest nod, though his jaw tightened, as if the weight of those words pressed directly against him.

“Rin,” Hiruzen continued, turning his gaze toward her. “Your gift is your compassion. But compassion can be both a strength and a danger. In the field, sentiment can cost lives as easily as it can save them. Trust your heart, but do not let it blind you.”

Rin bowed her head deeper this time.

“I understand, Hokage.” Her voice trembled only faintly, but Obito always watching her caught it.

“And you, Obito.”

His name alone made his throat close up. He lifted his head, trying to look steadier than he felt, but the Hokage’s eyes were sharp, penetrating.

“You are spirited,” Hiruzen said slowly. “Full of fire, full of heart. That is good Konoha needs shinobi with a will that does not bend. But fire without discipline burns out quickly. Do not chase strength to rival your teammates. Chase strength to protect them.”

Obito’s breath caught. For a moment, he swore the Hokage could see straight through him, into every corner of his restless thoughts. He clenched his fists tighter, willing his voice not to crack.

“Yes, Hokage,” he said at last.

Hiruzen studied them another moment, then set his pipe aside and folded his hands on the desk.

“This mission will test all three of you. But I believe you will succeed, because you are not just shinobi you are a team. Do not forget that. Whatever happens, you come back together.”

The words hung in the air like an oath.

Minato wasn’t with them this time their sensei already deployed elsewhere but his absence seemed to press in around the room.

And as the Hokage dismissed them, Obito couldn’t shake the knot in his chest: the need to prove himself worthy, not just of Rin’s smile or Kakashi’s respect, but of the trust Hiruzen had placed in him.

 

 

The forest pressed in around them, thick with shadows and the smell of damp earth. Every rustle of leaves could have been an enemy shinobi, every snap of a twig beneath their sandals a warning.

But Team Minato moved as one. Silent hand signals passed between them, quick glances sharp as kunai.

They were a current weaving through danger precise, fast, unrelenting.

Kakashi led the charge with ruthless efficiency, his blade flashing silver in the gloom. Every strike was clean, measured an enemy fell and Kakashi was already pivoting to the next.

His voice cut through the trees in clipped orders. “Left flank. Watch the treeline. Keep moving.”

Rin moved like light beside them, her hands glowing with soft green chakra. A wounded ally stumbled out of the brush a Konoha chūnin, blood slicking his arm.

She dropped to her knees without hesitation, pressing her palms to his wound.

“Hold still,” she murmured, focus absolute, even as shouts and steel rang behind her. Within seconds the bleeding slowed, and she urged him back toward the rear line before rising to rejoin her team.

Obito tried. Gods, he tried.

He wove signs, he threw kunai, he charged forward with every bit of fire he had but it always felt like a step too late.

Where Kakashi was precise, Obito was reckless.

Where Rin was calm, Obito’s pulse was a storm.

Every clash only sharpened the ache inside him: he wasn’t enough.

Not yet.

The ridge erupted before them.

Stone walls burst from the ground, fire roared in arcs of orange, and enemy shinobi poured into the clearing with a battle cry.

“Well, well,” one Iwa-nin sneered, stepping forward with his headband scratched across the symbol. His hands were already weaving signs.

“So, these are the Leaf brats sent to cripple our supply line? Pathetic.”

“Kill the Uchiha first,” another spat. “They always break the loudest.”

Obito’s stomach flipped, but he snarled, forcing fire into his lungs.

“Fire Release: Great Fireball Jutsu!” The flames roared from his chest, tearing through the brush. Two shinobi leapt aside, heat licking their faces. One smirked as he landed.

“Clumsy,” he mocked, hurling a kunai.

The blade kissed Obito’s arm, slicing skin. He hissed and staggered, blood running hot down his sleeve.

“Kakashi, flank right!” Rin’s voice carried like a bell through the chaos.

Kakashi was already moving. His tanto gleamed as he cut down one shinobi with a precise strike, then pivoted into a second.

“Stay sharp,” he barked, never looking back. “They’re trying to split us.”

Obito turned and the ground gave way beneath his feet. An Iwa-nin smirked as the stone cracked, chakra pouring from his hands. “Fall and be forgotten.”

For a breathless instant, Obito thought fate had finally caught him. The ridge shattered, rocks dragging him down.

His body slammed hard against stone, bone cracking under the impact. Pain shot through his leg blinding, searing, unbearable.

But then… nothing.

No crushing weight, no suffocating darkness.

Just the throb of agony in his limb and the raw scrape of breath in his lungs. He was alive.

“Obito!”

Rin skidded down the slope, knees digging into dirt, her chakra already blooming green at her palms.

Her face was pale with fear, her hands pressing against his shattered leg.

“Don’t move don’t you dare move I’ve got you, just stay with me.”

The Iwa-nin above sneered. “The medic’s distracted. Take her head.”

Kakashi was there before the enemy finished his step. His blade flashed, cutting the threat down without a word. Blood sprayed the dirt, and he stood over Rin and Obito like a shadow.

 His mask was streaked crimson, his voice calm but merciless.

“Can you fight?”

Obito’s chest heaved. Shame burned hotter than the pain in his leg.

He hated the way Rin looked at him with worry. He hated the way Kakashi’s question carried no hesitation, as if he already knew the answer should be no.

“I can fight,” Obito rasped, forcing himself upright. His fists shook. “Just—just give me a second.”

Kakashi’s visible eye narrowed, but he didn’t argue.

He pivoted back into the battle, blade finding another throat. Rin’s chakra pulsed harder, steady and warm against Obito’s leg.

Above them, more Iwa-nin jeered. “Leaf rats! You won’t leave here alive!”

Obito pushed himself up, stumbling, but the fire in his chest was louder than the pain.

“You’re wrong,” he spat, weaving signs through trembling hands. “We will!”

Together, the three pressed forward Kakashi a storm of steel, Rin a shield of healing light, Obito a blaze refusing to burn out.

Their jutsu crashed together, fire and lightning consuming wood and stone, until the Kannabi Bridge collapsed in a roar of flames and splintering beams.

Smoke curled into the sky, the supply line destroyed. And though battered, bloodied, and limping,

Team Minato stood unbroken.

 

 

The gates of Konoha loomed tall as the sun bled low over the horizon, the sky painted in streaks of gold and crimson.

The air smelled of smoke and dust, clinging stubbornly to their clothes, to their skin, to every weary step that carried them home.

Obito’s leg was swaddled in heavy bandages, the wrappings spotted with faint stains where Rin’s chakra hadn’t been enough to knit him whole.

Each stride sent a dull throb up his thigh, a constant reminder of how close he had come to being buried.

Worse still was the deeper wound gnawing at him pride splintered, carved hollow by the sight of his teammates moving ahead with less weight.

Kakashi strode in front, his pace brisk and unyielding. He didn’t limp.

He didn’t falter.

His tanto hung clean and oiled at his side, his white hair catching the last streaks of sunlight like it had been untouched by battle. Dust and blood clung to him too, but even exhausted, Kakashi looked untouchable like nothing could ever break him.

Rin walked between them, her steps even though her chakra reserves were scraped thin.

Shadows circled her tired eyes, yet she still held herself steady, shoulders squared, head unbowed. She wore a small smile, weary but determined, as if she could will the space between the three of them not to crack apart entirely.

“We made it back,” she murmured, voice quiet but sure. Almost to herself, almost to them both. “That’s what counts.”

Obito didn’t answer.

His teeth dug hard into the inside of his cheek, holding back words that clawed at his throat. We made it back because Kakashi carried us.

The Hokage’s tower rose before them soon after, tall and imposing in the fading light. By the time they climbed the steps and entered the chamber, the scent of pipe smoke lingered faint in the air.

Minato was waiting.

Their sensei stood straight, blond hair bright even in the dim, his jōnin vest unfastened at the collar from long hours.

Relief flickered through his eyes the moment they stepped in an unguarded softness, gone in a heartbeat but not missed. His shoulders eased.

When their report was done, Minato listened with patience, his gaze never drifting from them.

And when the last detail had been spoken, he smiled—the kind of smile that warmed and hurt in equal measure.

“You did well,” he told them, his voice low and gentle, as if the words were meant to catch each of them differently. “All three of you. Konoha owes you a great debt.”

Obito’s chest tightened painfully at the sound of it. He wanted to bask in the warmth of their sensei’s pride, to believe it, to take it into the hollow place inside him.

But the words lodged like ash in his throat.

Kakashi inclined his head, his visible eye calm.

“It wasn’t clean,” he said, voice clipped but steady. “Obito’s leg slowed us down. But the mission succeeded.”

The words weren’t cruel.

They weren’t even meant to wound.

They were matter-of-fact, like the swing of his blade clean, efficient, nothing more. But to Obito, they cut deeper than any kunai.

Minato’s gaze sharpened at Kakashi’s choice of words. Just for a breath, the soft warmth gave way to steel. “Obito’s leg slowed him down because he fought hard,” Minato corrected, his tone firm but gentle, carrying the weight of someone who saw more than skill.

“You all did. And you came back together. That is what matters most.”

Rin bowed her head, cheeks flushed faintly at their sensei’s praise. The line of her shoulders eased as if she were finally allowed to breathe.

Kakashi gave only a short nod, absorbing the words without argument, though his stance never shifted from that same sharp readiness.

Obito bowed last. Slower. Lower. Shame burned through him like fire under his skin. His lips moved with words he couldn’t keep in, a mutter barely audible but heavy in his chest.

I almost ruined everything.

 

They were dismissed soon after. The quiet in the Hokage’s office followed them out into the corridor, clinging to their shoulders like smoke.

Kakashi was the first to move.

He gave Minato a sharp nod, turned, and strode down the hall with his usual precision. His sandals scuffed lightly against the wooden floorboards, the sound steady, unbroken.

He didn’t glance back once not at Rin, not at Obito his focus already forward, toward the barracks, toward whatever came next.

Obito lingered.

His body felt heavier than the bandages dragging at his leg. His shoulders hunched, the knot in his chest refusing to ease.

Every word replayed in his head, Kakashi’s especially. Obito’s leg slowed us down.He could almost hear it as a verdict.

Rin slowed when she realized he wasn’t keeping up. She turned back, her expression softening as soon as her eyes found him sagging against the wall, looking smaller than she’d ever seen him. Without hesitation, she stepped closer and slipped her hand into his.

Her fingers were warm, firm, grounding.

“Obito,” she whispered, her thumb brushing gently across his knuckles. Her gaze locked on his, steady and sure despite the exhaustion written on her face. “You didn’t ruin anything.”

The words pierced through the storm inside him, but not as much as her touch.

His first instinct was to pull away, to guard himself, to keep her from feeling the tremor in his hand. But something stopped him. Maybe it was the way she held on like she meant it, like she wasn’t going to let him slip back into his own shadow.

“You’re here,” Rin continued, her voice low but resolute, like a healer delivering a cure. “That’s what matters.”

Obito swallowed hard. Her hand was small in his, but it felt like the only steady thing in the world.

A strange warmth spread from where her skin pressed against his something softer than fire, quieter than rage, but powerful in a way that left him unmoored.

He didn’t have a name for it, not yet. All he knew was that his heart beat differently when she touched him, faster and heavier, as though it wanted to climb into her palm too.

Her smile was tired but real. And for a breath, he believed her. For a breath, he believed he hadn’t failed.

But when his gaze drifted past her, down the long corridor, he caught sight of Kakashi’s retreating figure the white hair stark against the dim light, the shoulders squared, the pace unbroken.

Straight-backed, sharp, untouchable.

Always ahead.

Always leaving him behind.

Rin’s touch lingered warm in his hand. Kakashi’s shadow lingered cold in his chest.

And the thought gnawed at him, louder than her comfort, sharper than the pain screaming from his leg:

I’ll never catch up. Not like this.